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    DARKNESS FALLS by Andrew

    Darkness falls
    and the fear takes a hold
    shivers down your spine
    hairs stand on end
    a chill
    a haunting silence
    your heart beat is fast
    mouth dry
    listen, do you hear?
    something stirs
    it comes from below
    it's coming for you
    hide
    it can smell you
    it has a taste for blood
    it wants your blood
    quickly, into the celer
    bolt the door
    stay quiet
    it's waiting for you.

    c. andrew bedell

3 Comments on DARKNESS FALLS by Andrew

    • deleted user (Visitor)
    • Saturday, Mar. 17, 2007 @ 11.59:37

    Every childs nightmare. Well, it was mine. If you substitute hide under blankets stop breathing for into the cellar bolt door.

  • You're trying to spook me again - and suceeded!

  • Very chilling to read, indeed! Made me have goosepimples or maybe because I am wearing a short sleeved top which does not help!

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